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This is a snippet from my yet-to-be-completed NaNoWriMo story, Black Ink Plague, a fantasy about inkbloods, people who were left at the roots of a magic tree as babies, and can use charcoal from those trees to write and cast spells.
The main character, an inkblood called Liar, cast a spell to kill the gang leader called Cin, accepted payment from the gang’s second in command, then traveled to a nicer part of town, where she offers her mother some of the money, and her mother asks how Liar earned it.
“Nothing I wasn’t taught at school,” Liar shrugged.
Unlike many parents of inkbloods, who left their child at the roots of a Rakau tree with desperate hopes for a better future, her parents simply hadn’t known what to do with her. They’d had a son, a pampered only child for thirteen long years, and then a surprise daughter. With no interest in the effort it took to find a husband for their child, they’d placed her under a tree on the first full moon after her birth, and then handed her into the care of nannies until she was old enough to go to school.
When she was nine years old, he’d fallen ill, and died a few months later, leaving her parents with only the child they hadn’t wanted. Their grief excluded their daughter, for all that she’d lost a brother when they lost a son.
“Would you prefer not to be repaid for the debts you incurred on my behalf?” Liar asked, though she already knew the answer.
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Black Ink Plague is set in a world similar to ours, with the addition of the Rakau tree, which has magical properties–charcoal or ink from the tree can be used to cast spells. However, only inkbloods, babies who were left overnight at a Rakau tree’s roots on their first full moon, can harvest and use the tree. The price they pay for their magic is that the ink infects them, staining their skin and eventually forming words from the spells they cast on their skin. These words change their lives in unexpected ways.
Wow, thus sounds really good!! Keep us updated with how you’re going 🙂
Thanks!
I am really enjoying these pieces. The transport me to a different universe. Thank you, very much, for sharing.
Glad you’re enjoying it. It’s amazing how the made rush of NaNoWriMo comes together… if you’re lucky.
Nasty bit of business here. Breaks my heart.
Not all parents are good parents. Sad, but true.
I don’t always comment, but you’ve got an interesting bunch of excerpts here. The characters actions don’t seem forced, as if you pushed them to do what YOU wanted. They feel natural. That’s not always easy to do, so congrats!
One tiny suggestion? I realize this may be due to some editing to make the excerpt fit the WeWriWa guidelines, but to me, where you say “he’d fallen ill”, I thought you were referring to her nanny. It took me a couple of re-reads to realize you meant her brother.
Hope you pick up from here next time!
Yes, I tend to squeeze a few sentences together to make a section work. Sometimes I’m more successful than others!
I plan to finish out the scene before I move on to something else, don’t worry.
Interesting dynamic. Makes me wonder why Liar bothers to return. Still seeking parental approval? She’s developing into a fascinating character. You call this a story in your intro but I’m hoping it’s a novel.
It’s not a relationship with a lot of affection, but there’s plenty of duty keeping it together.
I still have to finish it, but I made my NaNoWriMo word count. It will be book length someday…
Your character’s name intrigues me: Liar. There’s a lot for her to live up to in that name!
Just to clarify, it’s her chosen name, a professional name all inkbloods have. That she chose this particular one says a lot about her. 😉
Is she paying off her parents to be free of them? ‘Cause that’s not an ignoble goal, however she carries it out.
She sees her parents rarely as it is–but they are her family, strained as it is.
That’s a fascinating family dynamic. I wonder what she wants with/from her parents after so many years of estrangement.
It didn’t fit in the snippet, but she’s been paying off the debt in pieces for some time, and doing the obligatory once a year holiday dinner.
I bet the magic doesn’t make it easier.
Liar’s mother wouldn’t relate well to her daughter anyway, but yes, Liar’s persistent weirdness doesn’t help.
Wow, Liar has an intriguing history. Like everyone else I wonder why she’s back in her parents’ house. You have another amazing story developing, Caitlin. I can’t wait to read the whole thing;).
Obligation drives her to pay back the debt they incurred for her schooling. That she does it in ways they would disapprove of is a bonus. 😉
I’m really enjoying the story and the rather grim world it’s set in. So many questions raised and points to ponder, which makes for a thoroughly satisfying experience. Another terrific snippet!
Glad you’re enjoy it!
Interesting background- poor kid! Though it sounds like her parents have no clue where her funds are coming from.
They have a general sense that it isn’t appropriate, but Liar doesn’t walk around saying she’s an assassin.