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This is a WIP, NaNoWriMo 2015, Forest Wed. Adann and Kaie (who was engaged), are married as symbols of their gods, and 2 weeks into their marriage, the gods’ blessing and the town are suffering, so they are sent on a hunting trip with two experienced hunters (Rui and Corliss). On the third day, Kaie and Adann  trap a kien (snake and anteater monster), and with great effort, kill it, getting injured it the process.



Leaning forward, hands braced on his knees, Kaie panted, trying to catch his breath. Adann wobbled as the rush of danger slowly drained from her body, and the slashes to her arm made themselves felt in throbbing aches.

She glanced down at the two gashes parting her skin, and suddenly, they burned much worse than a moment ago. Hissing at the pain, she headed for where she’d dropped her pack a little down the trail. First, she needed to clean the wound, and then she’d ask Kaie to help her bandage it.

Mixing dried herbs from her pack into a paste, she spread it over the cuts, careful to cover every bit of broken skin, wincing at the sting.

“Adann? Are you—” Kaie stopped, taking in the blood smeared on her arm. “You’re hurt!”

“It’s just a scratch,” Adann sluiced away the worst of the blood.

*    *    *

Beikife is a small town in something like the Amazon rain forest, protected by a pair of married gods. The gods are represented by human avatars, two young people chosen and married by divine power. The strength of the marriage represents the bond between the gods’ blessing, so the new forest wed must find a way to connect to each other, or the crops will fail, the rivers will flood, and the cursed monsters that live in the forest will claim many lives.


About Caitlin Stern

I have a MA in English, and have so many fantasy/urban fantasy WIPs it's not even funny. I'm an avid reader of science fiction, fantasy, mystery, romance, biography, fiction, and anything else that catches my interest. I collect books, and bookmarks I find that are visually appealing and useful.

27 responses »

  1. Ed Hoornaert says:

    I get the impression that this incident may be a real turning point between them. About time.

  2. He is definitely going to have to take care of her now! I was wincing as I read.

  3. Looks like he’s more hurt than he cares to admit. Nice snippet!

  4. Wonderful scene-so real. Maybe he’ll wake up and take care of this wonderful brave wife of his.

  5. Poor Adann has to do everything! This guy needs to get out of his self pity party and help her LOL. Nice “after the action” snippet.

  6. Rin-Rin says:

    Ouch! I hope it isn’t poisonous. It doesn’t seem like it, so hopefully not. Great scene! 🙂

  7. Alexis Duran says:

    “Just a scratch”? She’s one tough cookie but I hope Kaie steps up and helps her out.

  8. Author Jessica E. Subject says:

    Oh, let him take care of you!! Shows just how strong Adann is, but sometimes she needs to ask for help. Like Ed, I think this can be a real turning point for them. Fab snippet! 🙂

  9. Her strength and wisdom continue to amaze me. Really well-written scene, Caitlin! 🙂

  10. elainecsc2013 says:

    That sounds like real concern.

  11. It’s always worse when you look at it. I love how tough she is! Can’t wait for more!

  12. Karen Michelle Nutt says:

    This is the turning point, right? Can’t wait to find out.

  13. chellecordero says:

    Adann is definitely a capable young lady and I hope she doesn’t worry about losing that ability if she leans on Kaie a bit. With that one obervation he seems concerned for her, I hope he will act on that. Nice possibilities.

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