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This is a WIP, NaNoWriMo 2016, currently called River, Tree, Mountain. It’s science fiction, set on a colony planet, six generations in–with 10% of the population born “marvels,” who have special abilities like dowsing, healing, or creating fire. The protagonist, Rekka Lang, is a spark (fire), signed a contract with Brenton to provide him a child (NOT married/permanently paired), moves in with him–4 months after she moved in, they go to a family dinner, where Rekka is talking to Acacia, Brenton’s 2 1/2 year old daughter.
(Relevant info: most children demonstrate powers around the age of two, Acacia hasn’t. Phoenix, Brenton’s older sister, has a child with no powers.)
“They forgot to light the candles,” Brenton said from across the table, standing and reaching for the centerpiece closest to him.
“Let me get it, I can show Acacia,” Rekka said, and when he sat down, picked up the candle dish. “You know your daddy can make sparks, and your mommy? So can I.” She summoned a spark a little past the end of her finger, touching the three tea light candle wicks in turn.
Acacia giggled and clapped, “Again!”
After setting down the dish and restoring its cover, Rekka leaned toward Acacia, cupping her hands a safe distance to prevent any grabbing from tiny hands. She created another spark, and let it drift down to extinguish itself on her skin, and then a third. “Aren’t they pretty, like fireflies?”
“Liarfries?” Acacia repeated.
* * *
Life on the colony planet of Kaibou was going uneventfully until the second generation of colonists was born on the planet, at some, at a young age, began showing various psychic abilities. When those people, called marvels, grew up, many of them formed companies, building compounds to live in and raise their children. Due to population diversity issues, many colonists have children using genetic bank material, or choose a succession of partners. Now on the seventh generation, marvels are born both within and without company walls, and all must work together to use their gifts and make a living on a still wild land. Some of these outsider marvels sign contracts with company marvels, agreeing to give them a child raised within the company, in return for a permanent home in the company compound, a stipend, and other concessions.
I love Acacia’s mispronunciation.
Seems like a pretty big word for a little kid. 🙂
Such a fascinating world you’re building in this story!
Glad you’re enjoying it! 🙂
Home life with a baby. How sweet. And the father? What about him?
Brenton does visit his daughter often, though that didn’t make it into any of the snippets, because he never took Rekka with him.
She did ask, but this is the first time she’s met Acacia.
Such a cute interaction. And the details of this world are amazing! 🙂
Glad you think so! 🙂
Interesting view of home life and also how her power works. Enjoyed the snippet!
Glad you enjoyed! 🙂
Wonderful scene to encourage the child. I hope her powers show themselves soon. Is it a stigma in this society not to have powers?
It’s about 10% of the population, but the companies build themselves around powers, and marvels are valued–and privileged.
Liarfries – love it.
Tweeted.
Everyone has a Spoonerism now and then. 😉
Tee hee, I love most little kids in books. 😉
I hope I capture her well!
Sweet interaction between Rekka and Acacia.
Acacia is a sweet kid. I enjoyed writing her dialogue. 🙂
Sweet babies make a house a home. Loved the excerpt.
There are a lot of kids on a growing colony planet, too! 🙂
Great excerpt. Calm amid the turmoil. Her mispronunciation is so sweet. Is it a premonition?
I figured it was a pretty bog word, and added in a Spoonerism. And I guess that depends on what you think is coming next! 😉
This is a great excerpt – wonderful “showing” of the family dynamics and personalities; feels like a very warm and loving family! The world building described sounds fascinating, too!
I’ve created some unusual family dynamics, but I think I can make them work. Glad you agree! 🙂